Saturday, February 27, 2010

y's taste like rain

his name
tastes like cedar
or how cedar might taste
if you ever tasted it.

yours is more like air
flavored water
nothing with a little
something 
vague and soft
in the background.

nouns are rich
verbs spice
to adjective's sweet

conjunctions taste like
sips of juice
between breaths

but there are some words
that explode
pouring
from your lips
like music
made into letters.

i love you.

4 comments:

Milka said...

I adore this poem. <3

That Mash Guy said...

really nice.

deeznia said...

i keep visiting your blog and re-reading this
suberbly simple yet so beautiful ~i love

YourOasis said...

wow that is really good. :)